Tempo of reading
Read aloud, or almost aloud. Kakitsubata's short lines hold the pause like a blow — don't smooth out the ragged rhythm.
The text What did the Aztecs sing when breaks the question “what did the Aztecs sing” against the horizon and against a child's fear of asking. The text Extremes Sat on the couch. Scream sits “Extremes” down on the couch so plainly that the absurd becomes domestic. If a poem looks “simple”, slow down on the last line: that is usually where the everyday turns into a verdict.
The everyday as metaphysics
The fridge, the cigarette, the metro, the rented room — not background. In the poetics of this book the ordinary field of objects becomes the site of an existential event.
Rain falls inside the fridge. Puddles are scattered all over the flat. I decided you won't find me among them turns April into a climate inside an appliance: rain, hail, ice, the “baking tray” of puddles. In this rain every day — it's all one and drives water to paranoia — “forgot to wash my face: I grew afraid of water”. I read in the cellars of Versailles to old rats lowers poems down to the “old rats” — down where culture eats itself. Look for the place where a familiar thing refuses to be convenient.
Humor without anesthesia
Laughter here is not release but a blade. It doesn't cancel the pain and it doesn't decorate it.
Google, build a road prays to a search engine for a road “to the living, forgotten God” — and gets an error; funny exactly until it becomes the truth about our century. And how old you are — doesn't matter — screws the past into thoughts “like curlers” — tenderness and mockery in one gesture. If a smile appears, check whether it cuts the conscience deeper than any pathos.