Kakitsubata

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Time 時

The theme of time in contemporary poetry opens through private experience, metaphysical imagery and existential strain. In these poems time is not a backdrop but an active subject shaping consciousness and fate.

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And grabbing air · so hard that · gills come out, you catch with your mouth the Cosmos's icy freeze.

— Andrey Kakitsubata

A reading of the poems about time

In the poems gathered around time we meet an ambiguous perception: time destroys and creates at once. In In the days, When fingers wove like vine, Where across the rooftops walked there is nostalgia and the pain of losses, where «routine's reinforced concrete bridge» stands for the weight of obligations binding a life. The contrast of «eyes undiluted by alcohol» and «the worn-through canvas of Instagram» sharpens the conflict between the honesty of the past and the surface of the present. In Extremes Sat on the couch. Scream the theme of time takes on a futurist tint — the fear of having no old age, of an artificial continuation of life, where the human is measured in digital terms. And grabbing air so hard that gills come out is a metaphor of time as icy cosmos, isolation and wordless eternity, where the rhythm of the poem recalls the even swing of a metronome.

Poetics and rhythm

The rhythmic structure shifts from the measured breathing of Measured breathing, The load of a long distance. Gradual getting used to it to the ragged, almost fragmentary flow of Extremes Sat on the couch. Scream. That change of rhythm follows the instability of how time is felt and the inner wavering of the lyric subject. The images are often layered: in What did the Aztecs sing when death and time merge into a dance, where «with stone smashed teeth on the Horizon» is a metaphor of a fate that cannot be beaten. The poetic voice is intimate and archetypal at once, balanced between private experience and universal sense.

Motifs and images

The central motif is time as an implacable current shaping the self and the world around it. The image of In the days, When fingers wove like vine, Where across the rooftops walked stands for the contemporary fragmentation of perception, where moments replace each other fast and leave no trace. In Neither white nor black, Nor pockets full of immortality: If only a shot of something fresh human helplessness before time and death is shown alongside the pull towards the new and the renewed. The image of «the dancing God» in the poem about the Aztecs What did the Aztecs sing when is a sign of a vital energy that swallows time and space; it frightens and thrills at once. The motifs of love and parting are also tightly bound to time, as in And how old you are — doesn't matter — and The cat went missing, a dog turned up. Life — a skew off the norm: you can roll off with no wheels, where past and present braid into a complicated dance of memory and feeling.

Context and philosophy

The theme of time in contemporary Russian poetry is tightly tied to existential questions: the meaning of life, the inevitability of losses, the fear of being forgotten. In a digital age where information is instant and shallow, the poems try to give time back its human scale, as inner experience and memory. Memories of the past, dread of the future, the sense of a present that is fragile and slipping away — all of it carries the philosophical depth. Poems such as Yesterday you stopped Eating for breakfast Good thoughts show the inner fight with despair and the search for light in the dark, and And the phosphorus burning in bones, and the sharp dirk of thought will help, while I'm a guest at yours offers a metaphor of life as a fragile but burning source of energy.

How to read these poems about time

Reading poems about time asks you to enter an atmosphere where feeling and thought move alongside image and rhythm. Don't try to catch one single meaning; take in the layering and contradiction of time as something fluid and shifting. Tune to the change of rhythmic waves, feel the tension between past and present, between eternity and the instant. Watch the metaphors — they often hold the key to the existential experience of the lyric subject. These poems are less a narrative than an emotional and philosophical dialogue with time.

FAQ

What are the main images used to characterise time in these poems?

Time is drawn through the metaphors of «Eternity's metronome», «the worn-through canvas of Instagram», «the dancing God» and the icy cosmos. These images underline its double nature — a force that creates and destroys.

How does rhythm affect the reading of time in these poems?

The rhythmic swings from smooth, measured breathing to sharp, broken phrases build a sense of instability and shifting time, reflecting the inner experience of the lyric subject.

What is the existential charge of the poems about time?

The existential charge shows in the search for meaning, in getting past the fear of death and parting, and in the attempt to keep something authentic and remembered in a world that changes fast.

How does the present day affect the perception of time in these poems?

The present brings a sense of fragmentation and surface, signalled for instance by the image of Instagram, which stands against the depth of a private experience of time and memory.

How are the themes of time and love connected in And how old you are — doesn't matter — and The cat went missing, a dog turned up. Life — a skew off the norm: you can roll off with no wheels?

In these poems the past and present of love braid together, and time is felt as a weaving of memories and feelings, which underlines the fragility and the beauty of a bond inside a life.